One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision

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Dear Divya, Hope you are doing well. I'm honoured that you considered me for your new

business

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venture.

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I was a little sceptical at

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but

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after some research, I really liked the idea. The main feature of your app

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, connecting businesses like social media was exceptional. I'm totally ready to be your

business

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partner. If the plan works, we might need to find investors soon. I already started working on the

business

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plan and the list of potential investors. The initial amount for bootstrapping will be around $5000. As I just became a father, my financial situation is not that good, you have to bear the full cost. As you are a

self motivated

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and highly enthusiastic person. You have the courage and dedication to build

this

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business

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from scratch. That was

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main reason I decided to say yes. Can't wait to see you. Best Wishes, Saurabh

Mon Mar 09 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision

The consumption of the world’s resources is increasing at a dangerous rate. Where are causes and solutions ?

3.Describe how you manage your time when you are both planning and coordinating activities in your personal schedule.

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively though other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that children should not watch television as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The crime nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance in technology which can help prevent and solve crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?