One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. write a letter to reply him: - give your opinion about your friend's business idea - tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer - and explain your reason for this decision

Dear Divya, Hope you are doing well. I'm honoured that you considered me for your new
business
venture.
Although
I was a little sceptical at
first
but
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after some research, I really liked the idea. The main feature of your app
that is
, connecting businesses like social media was exceptional. I'm totally ready to be your
business
partner. If the plan works, we might need to find investors soon. I already started working on the
business
plan and the list of potential investors. The initial amount for bootstrapping will be around $5000. As I just became a father, my financial situation is not that good, you have to bear the full cost. As you are a
self motivated
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and highly enthusiastic person. You have the courage and dedication to build
this
business
from scratch. That was
my
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main reason I decided to say yes. Can't wait to see you. Best Wishes, Saurabh

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