The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows the changes in International

turism

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tourism

, Diary and Meat

products

for Southland trades in three different years, 2000, 2020, and 2025. The most noticeable trend is that International

turism

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tourism

regularly

increase

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thoughout

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throughout

the period. Dairy

products

initially

peaks

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and slightly drops

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in the

inthe

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in the

future projection;

whereas

Meat

products

constantly decrease,

According to

the data seems that International

turism

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tourism

from £ 8

billions

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in 2000 has increased slightly and now in 2020, has reached £ 9

billions

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billion

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.It is estimated that

Iternational

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International

turism

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tourism

will reach £ 10

billions

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billion

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in 2025. About

diary

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dairy

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products

from £ 7

billions

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billion

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2000

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the exportation has grown in 2020 with a peak of almost £ 10

billions

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billion

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,to lightly drop to £ 9,5

billions

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billion

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in 2025's prediction. As concerns Meat

products

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the features

shows

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a production of £ 6

billions

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in 2000 that has

fell

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to 5,5

billions

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in 2020. It is predicted that

sells

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sales

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will continue to decrease in future.

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The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries.

Nowadays people normally stretch their working hours and get stressed than before. What are the reasons for this? What employers can do to make people's life easier?

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past. Do you agree or desagree?

Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？