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The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the changes in International
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turism
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tourism
, Diary and Meat
products
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 for Southland trades in three different years, 2000, 2020, and 2025. The most noticeable trend is that International
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turism
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tourism
 regularly
increase
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thoughout
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throughout
 the period. Dairy
products
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initially
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peaks
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 and slightly drops
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in the
inthe
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in the
 future projection;
whereas
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 Meat
products
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 constantly decrease,
According to
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 the data seems that International
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turism
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tourism
 from £ 8
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billions
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 in 2000 has increased slightly and now in 2020, has reached £ 9
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billions
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.It is estimated that
Iternational
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International
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turism
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tourism
 will reach £ 10
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billions
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billion
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 in 2025. About
diary
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dairy
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products
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 from £ 7
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billions
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billion
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 in
2000
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,2000
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 the exportation has grown in 2020 with a peak of almost £ 10
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billions
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billion
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,to lightly drop to £ 9,5
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billions
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billion
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 in 2025's prediction. As concerns Meat
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products
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,products
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 the features
shows
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show
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 a production of £ 6
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billions
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billion
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 in 2000 that has
fell
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 to 5,5
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billions
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billion
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 in 2020. It is predicted that
sells
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sales
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 will continue to decrease in future.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words turism, products, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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