The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
The pie charts provide information about how many
resources
are spent and consumed in a variety of different countries and the
percentage
of the
population
who was in the
world
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
people spend most of their expenditure
for
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foods
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food
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and more than half of the
world
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population
lives in Asia, more than half of the
resources
are consumed by the USA and European people. Looking at the data sets of
the
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world
spending in more detail, it can be seen that the
percentage
of the
foods
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food
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in the
world
which is spent
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in
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the highest proportion, at 24%, followed by transport expenditure, at 18%. Housing and clothing expenditure
consist
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of
considerably
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lower
ratio
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ratios
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of the
world
spending, at 12% and 6%, respectively. 40% of
world
spending consists of others. Turning to the
world
population
sets, it is evident that the highest proportion of the
population
comes from Asia, at 57%.
In contrast
, 14% of the
world
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population
consists of both European and American.
Similarly
,
African
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the African
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population
stands at 10% and
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others
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population
has the lowest
percentage
, at 5% in the
world
.
Finally
, the
percentage
of
resources
which is consumed
stand
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at 60%, which is the highest value on the charts,
whereas
rest
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the rest
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of the
world
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world's
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population
consume
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consumes
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only 40% of
resources
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words resources, percentage, population, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • data
  • spending habits
  • consumption
  • resources
  • population distribution
  • comparison
  • patterns
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • implications
  • disparities
  • environmental consequences
  • social impacts
  • sustainability
  • economic development
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