In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

As a result
of increase in population, there is a need for construction of more structures for people and useful areas for
this
is
tue
in the direction of
to
the
true
countryside
while some think it is better to guard the available area by not constructing any building therein. In
this
essay, I shall discuss both views and make my thoughts known on the matter. It is a general believe that comfort is key in one's life.
As a result
of overpopulation in the
city
, there are a lot of dangers associated with
;
Accept space
;
this
such
high rate of crime, exposure to
diseases
Suggestion
disease
outbreaks. In order to guide against
such
problems, there is a need to reduce
th the
definite article
the
the the
population in which certain set of people will have to relocate elsewhere. In a controlled populated area, rate of vices
are reduced
Suggestion
is reduced
and residents have access to basic amenities like electricity in a well controlled manner.
Food
security is a crucial factor
for
Suggestion
in
human existence. Migration of people from the
city
to
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
will definitely have
adverse effect
Suggestion
an adverse effect
on
food
production. Land for cultivation of crops either
food
or cash will be
reduced thereby
Accept comma addition
reduced, thereby
affecting supply of
food
together with income
been
the state or fact of existing
being
generated from farming. Building homes in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
also affects
Suggestion
also affect
natural vegetation. On the final note
,
Accept space
,
countryside
are basically areas where farming could be practiced and altering the vegetation due to urgency for
house
Suggestion
housing
in the
city
may impose great danger. In my own opinion, I strongly agree that
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
should be preserved in order to have uninterrupted
food
supplies and designs for building in the
city
should be modified as as to allow more structures.

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