You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: • Apologize for being late in returning the money • Explain what happened • Say how you are going to fix the issue now

My schedule was so hectic that I hardly could find some time to sit and write to you. Hope you are doing great.
Finally
, I am writing
this
letter to say, how sorry I am for forgetting to pay you back.
First
of all, I apologize that it just skipped my mind to pay you back that I borrowed
last
month, promising you to return in a week. As you know, I needed that money for the down payment of the loan as I urgently needed a car for my office commute in
this
bad weather.
However
, to my dismay, after getting the car, there was no day in peace as it got lots of troubles in its machine.
Additionally
, the service centre was pathetic and kept me on toes till it was resolved. With all these hardships, the forgetful me forgot about the money.
Finally
, I have done NEFT to your account and by
this
time you might have received it in your account.
Furthermore
, you will soon receive a Zoomland ticket for you and your spouse tomorrow. Consider it as my penalty for keeping your money for so long. I can’t thank you enough for coping up with me. See you soon. Take care.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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