Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Many
museums
charge people
for entry while
other do not charge any money. There are few advantages and disadvantages at the same time which we will discuss.
By charging folks for their entry can reduce the number of people
who visit
the museums
. The advantages of few people
visiting the museum
can be that people
can see the antiques and gain knowledge effectively also
less number of individuals can create ease for the museum
's management to give their services in a extraordinary way. For example
: texila museum
is visited by very few people
due to
its very high entrance fee but visiting this
highly paid Museum
give a lot
of information about the old religion Gautam Buddha at the same time will make sure that you will get all the possible available services. So, by paying high value for visiting collections you get a lot
of information, good services and free space etc.
Disadvantages of Museum
charging a lot
of money is that if the admission charges will be so high than very few people
will be able to visit
the Museum
while
other poor but curious people
will not be able to visit
those museums
. For instance
in Japan there is a museum
by the name Juri. It is as good as texila Museum
but it is visites by very few people
because people
of Japan are very poor and they are unable to pay such
high price although
they want to visit
there for not a lot
of people
get to visit
.therefore
not a lot
of people
get to visit
the museums
due to
their financial situations.
In conclusion : we can say that advantages of charging people
for admission to museums
charging people
outweigh the disadvantages. By charging people
knowledge, good service and free space is provided to people
even though it reduce number of people
for visiting museums
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