Does a celebrity life has more problems or benefits? What is your opinion?

We all admire some or the other
celebrity
whether be it a movie star or an ace athlete. From the perspective of a fan, it may seem that their lives are prefect but is it truly so? Today we will discuss a
celebrity
's
life
from their point of view and try and understand what is actually
means
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meant
to be famous. Being a
celebrity
definitely comes with several benefits - the most beneficial being fame. Once famous, a
celebrity
is an icon in the mind of the public. They are loved and followed by fans all across the world. People from all genres of walk know them and want to be a part of their
life
. But is it really that great? The way I look at it is, fame is a duel edged sword. Where there are fans, there are all critics who criticize everything they do and tend to put a
constraint
a quantity that does not vary
constant
pressure on a
celebrity
to maintain an extremely clean image. At the same time, there is
expectation
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expected
to endorse responsibly at all times even if that means going against personal likes to please the audience. As a
celebrity
, one has a tremendous power to influence, especially young minds. Many fans emulate their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
celebrities for their likes and dislikes. As a
celebrity
, one's personal choices are constantly being evaluated by their fans and is at risk of incorrectly influencing minds if not promoted in the right spirit.
This
is a huge concern as many celebrities probably lead dual lives - an
onscreen
one that shows them as someone very generous and responsible while they actually might not be in their real lives putting them at a risk to constantly battling dual personalities at all times in their personal and professional relationships. As a
celebrity
, not only are they in the limelight but their families
also
have to share the benefits and disadvantages of the constant public scrutiny. The benefit is that they become mini celebrities in their space and have easier ways to establish
network
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networks
.
However
, they do
also
have all their
life
choices being judged and debated for moral correctness at all
times which
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times, which
can be quite frustrating as a spouse, child, etc. As a child, there is always that added pressure of living up to the
parent's
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parents'
talent ruining childhood for many known kid stars. To sum up, though the advantages of being a
celebrity
are far too great, being able to handle the constant attention is a different
ballgame
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ball game
altogether. And very few have actually managed to live a balanced
life
without having to resort to drugs and other addictions.
Hence I
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Hence, I
do think that being a
celebrity
has more downfalls than attractions.

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