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With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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In the techno savvy era, due to the advancement of
technology
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, the usage of the Internet is becoming increasing
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 by
day
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. These people consider
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 to
face
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interaction
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 as a past and prefer to talk through
technology
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 by messages and Internet.
This
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 essay will discuss why a direct meeting will not be in fashion, because of the new inventions of
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 and the Internet.
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 with, the people who are in the favour of commuting with a phone and a laptop, have a valid reason for that. They believe that it is a
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 saving factor to
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 technological tools to talk to anyone, because it is flexible way which one can
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 anywhere.
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, if a person wants to talk to any friend,
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 there is no need to go to the house of that friend, because it will
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 consuming.
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, if he/she will
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 the Internet to communicate, it will take less
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.
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 is a reason why the internet should be used and the
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 to
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interaction
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 will be invisible.
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, another reason is the busy work - life. Almost all members of the family are working on these days and because of the busy schedule, they do not have
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 to interact with anyone.
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, a person is doing 8 hours shift in a
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 and he/she spends at least 2 hours of travelling, and after doing cooking, cleaning, no one has the capacity to go anywhere for
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 to
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 communication. So
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 why the physical
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 is decreasing
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 by
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. To conclude, due to the
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, the
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 to
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 communication will no longer be in
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. I am an absolutely agree with the statement and the
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 to
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interaction
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 will definitely invisibly.
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