Some people believe online reading materials should be only used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Enormous amounts of internet access made people to believe in online reading and

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they strongly suggest that it is a good way for children to learn, but others believe that the hard copies of books should be used. In the following paragraph I will provide both points and give my personal opinion. Certainly, online materials can be used anywhere and anytime. It makes children more time to read while doing other activities like travelling. In electronic copies of books, the words are connected with some links

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as dictionary, meaning of the word. In

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way, they can get to know the meaning of that particular word. And

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students are attracted towards colourful and easy access online materials.

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, while spending more time on reading online materials, it creates an impact on children's health. But that will not be the case while reading in printed materials.

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, online reading can cause eye strain or neck stiffness. By reading in printed materials, children can stay away from technology a few hours a day. The major disadvantages of printed materials, we cannot get the meaning of unknown words and less environmentally friendly. At the conclusion, when comparing online reading with printed materials, online reading is more environmentally friendly, colourful, attractive and interactive. I personally believe that online readers should be used by children to learn to read.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

228 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

online reading materials
printed materials
advantages
disadvantages
technology
convenience
interactivity
accessibility
visual appeal
physical books
parental guidance
digital skills
screen time
learning experience
personal preference
comprehension
critical thinking
creativity
word recognition
grammar
vocabulary development
reading habits

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Some people believe online reading materials should be only used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

These days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities?

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.

The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year.

Many people think it is the government’s responsibility to ensure the provision of good health care for everyone in the community and that each individual should be cared for by State medical programmes. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?