You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

Hi Carl, I hope
this
email finds you in good health and high spirits. It has been a long
time
since we have met. In case you are wondering - how am I? , I am absolutely fine and doing good.
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of exciting developments on my side. More the reason for us to catch up and shake up a leg. I will keep all the detail for our visit, but to sum up - life has been crazy
last
year and
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was busy as hell. I was desperately looking forward
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a break and thought of spending
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quality
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with you like our good old days. I am missing those good old days. I am arriving on 23rd
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. Hope that
time
suits you well and you can spare 3 days together.
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thing
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would like to tell you is - No pressure !!!. I would like to have lots of interesting tasks so just keep some free
time
. Most importantly appetite for beer a lot of energy for shaking a leg or two with me. It feels like years have passed since we had a refreshing Samba
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Hoping to meet you soon. Regards Sachin

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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