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Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued by some that the perfect method to remain healthy is to join the fitness
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, whereas others believe that by doing regular tasks like walk on foot and use the staircase is more than enough to become slim. Whilst a discussion of both these views is worthwhile, I am a supporter of the latter view. On the one hand, utilizing the health clubs will ensure the fitness of the people by doing more exercises.
That is
 to say that it
will have trainer
Suggestion
will have a trainer
 to guide us and it helps the person to tone the specific part of their body either to reduce or increase the shape.
Moreover
, it will help us to regulate the task perfectly without any slippage.
For example
, in most of the countries, because of sedentary lifestyle people opt to go to gym to reduce their excess fat and be healthy.
However
, I do not support
this
 notion because once we leave the equipment workouts it will make us to gain more weight which is not good for health.
On the other hand
, using the stairs to go to the top or walking
in
Suggestion
on
into
 the ground will make everyone to stay fit forever.
In other words
,
this
 is the easiest and simple technique without spending any amount to endure in good physical shape.
For instance
, in most of the countryside in India, people prefer to walk on their foot to go to the nearest place and
also
 use escalator to go upstairs which made them to be active at the age of 80 or 90. In my opinion, I agree that it is the slow process to maintain our
body but
Accept comma addition
body, but
 it is the steady and safer way to keep us healthy forever. In conclusion,
although
 going to
gymnasium
Suggestion
the gymnasium
a gymnasium
 will help the person to utilize all the equipment and
trainer
Suggestion
trained
 to make them able-bodied, I reiterate that it might be harmful in the future
instead
 the regular activities like marching and using steps will be sufficient to burn the fat.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cardiovascular health
  • resistance training
  • physical endurance
  • muscle tone
  • caloric expenditure
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivational factor
  • fitness regimen
  • holistic health
  • sustainable exercise habit
  • metabolic rate
  • physical exertion
  • exercise consistency
  • health maintenance
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