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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's live. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a constant pursuit of happiness thoro
ughout our
all the way through
throughout
lives. Needless to say, while it is considered by the vast majority of people-count me in- that the most enjoyable
time
 of
life
 is adolescence period,yet,
a
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,
ppr
e
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,
ciable sum of people believe that adulthood is
second
 to no none
time
 of
life
. Despite the overw
ehlming obli
so strong as to be irresistible
overwhelming
gations. In
this
 essay we will elaborate the whole debate and point of views. Some could be influenced by the enormous burdens on adult
's shoulders which incl
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an adult's shoulders, which
an adult's shoulders which
ude; paying bills, obtaining a constant figure and
also
 raising children, yet alot
of t
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a lot
hem could be an amusi
ng
surprising greatly
amazing
life
. As the medium-aged group are capable of living their lives freely making their own choices without being blamed,
for instance
; travelling overseas, drink
in alco
the act of consuming liquids
drinking
hol, spending their money on whatever their fingertips can be reached by,
besides
 investing in whatever they imagine to be beneficial.
This
 sensational feeling of being the decision maker and owning your
life
 rather than being thoug
hfully hija
in a thoughtful manner
thoughtfully
cked is just do delig
htful.
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delightfully
Nevertheless
, in my own point of view the youth
life
 is the
time
 of our
life
, where we not only get to be impulsive and outgo
ing but
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outgoing, but
also
 be responsibility free as our raiser will be devoted to take good care of us, while giving us the
time
 and space to encounter and experience new things fo ex
am
appropriate to; intended for
for
ple, a young loves
tory that
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love story
 will be recalled throughout our lifetime. In conclusion, as far as i am
c
refers to the speaker or writer
I
oncerned happiness is a choice that could be felt whenever, wherever you genuinely want to but in my opinion the road to happiness is more paved by the hands of our parents during adolescence.

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