Some people think that newsapers are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
contempary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
world, due to the advancement in technology, the world
has became
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has become
a smaller place. The half population
think
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thinks
that newspapers
is
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are
the greatest source for them to receive
informations
a message received and understood
information
. While, others
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that
internet
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the internet
is superior than other sources of
informations
a message received and understood
information
. I would like to put shine on both the sides and provide evidence why newspaper has its
benefits but
Accept comma addition
benefits, but
why
internet
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the internet
is
more effective way
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a more effective way
.
To begin
with, there are several benefits of reading newspapers.
First
and foremost, by daily reading, it helps in increasing reading skills as it
contain
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contains
high standard of language.
In addition
, vocabulary and grammar
also
improves by reading.
Consequently
, an individual who
read
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reads
newspaper daily are able to understand the language quickly and speak
fluetly
in a fluent manner
fluently
.
Moreover
, reading newspapers is the way of spending free time in an effective use.
Additionally
, an individual can read them at
anytime
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any time
.
For instance
, many people use newspapers to kill time with gaining knowledge
instead
of spending on
phone
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the phone
which affect their eyes and brain. On the flip side, there are opposing voices saying that news is presented better on television or the
internet
.
Firstly
,
web
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the web
is providing material for learning online.
Becayse
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Because
of
this
, everyone gets a chance to learn about
anyting
an indefinite thing
anything
at free of cost.
For example
, latest studies prove that in the
last
6 years, the percentage of
student
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students
who study by using
this
facility increasing rapidly.
Last
but not least,
this
source of news
provide
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provides
information all around the world.
In addition
, if
helpsin
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helps in
the raising awarness among
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raising awareness among the
the raising awareness among
people on critical things
gobally
throughout the world
globally
.
For example
, with the help of
internet
, every nation is aware of corona
viruse
(virology) ultramicroscopic infectious agent that replicates itself only within cells of living hosts; many are pathogenic; a piece of nucleic acid (DNA or RNA) wrapped in a thin coat of protein
virus
verse
viruses
which is the most harmful disease. To encapsulate the whole notion, I gather that
web authority
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the web authority
of news is
more usefull source
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a more useful source
more useful source
as it has more merits than others.
Newspaper
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The newspaper
is good way increasing language skills.
However
, online facilities provide news
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
to all.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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