Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this

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developing animals national park to safeguard rare species.
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On the one hand, the main advantage of preserving wild animals is that to support nature to have the existence of the
food
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chain cycle. Eventually,
wildlife
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supporting nature above and beyond for the ecosystem.
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, all the animals are very important to our ecosystem. If there is a chance of disappearance of one of them
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herbivores, carnivores and omnivores, the other gets over populated and affects the
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chain
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. So it is very important to save
wildlife
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to keep our ecosystem healthy and safe.
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, if carnivores
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disappear
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herbivores gets overpopulated because carnivores depend on other animals for their
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, the main disadvantage of building
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sanctuary is
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a threat
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. Sanctuaries are to be maintained and monitored at in a frequent interval.
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, one has to take a population count for each
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animal
and has to take necessary action if found any abnormalities are found else, animals start entering human settlements
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scarcity and humans cannot live their
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peacefully.
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, In Jurassic park movie, dinosaur’s population increased without the knowledge of the scientist and resulted in danger to
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human's
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. To conclude, developing
wildlife
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sanctuaries to save the endangered species is very important for the
food
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chain cycle to support
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a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
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has to be monitoring the population count,
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, to save the human resource from the endangered species.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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