Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

#life #technology

Life

is a gift, we have heard

this

saying often in our lives, but have we given it little thought what

life

is all about??

Life

is a journey that starts when someone is born and end with death,

life

has too many

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

calories

life

can be happy, miserable, meaningful, meaningless,

aimbitious

having a strong desire for success or achievement

ambitious

and lost. Since the inception of

human race

Suggestion

the human race

, we've always endeavoured to make things more convenient for us.

Life

when spent with luxuries is often considered a good

life

Technology

is just an aspect of human development towards the betterment of

life

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life, however

however

technology

has its pros and cons.

Technology

can benefit us in many ways,

infact our

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in fact, our

in fact our

lives are completely changed with

technology

. Someone a century ago would not have imagined the kind of

life

we are living today, the amenities bestowed by

technology

Suggestion

are

un-countable. We have

means

Suggestion

the means

to travel, faster than ever. We can communicate miles away without even moving an inch. We can witness the

exhalirating

making lively and cheerful

exhilarating

events happening

aroud

in the area or vicinity

around

the world, without even leaving our room. We can learn, earn, get entertained at our homes. All of

this

is the blessing of

technology

and to be fair

technology

has made

life

much better.

However

technology

has

also

impacted human race in not very positive way.

For example

: People were healthier

generaly

usually; as a rule

generally

, when they used to play physical sports, but now with the spread of

technology

people don't often go out to play, they engage in computer games and

that is

not a very healthy

habbit

an established custom

habit

. Another downside of

technology

is that, it has limited human interaction to very minimal and only for use. We can see the world, but we are often unaware of our family matters,

this

is only because we spent much time on social media and we've lost interest in human

intereaction

a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting

interaction

interactions

, which is causing

disfunction

(medicine) any disturbance in the functioning of an organ or body part or a disturbance in the functioning of a social group

dysfunction

is society as

whole

Suggestion

a whole

. So I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

technology

has changed human lives in a positive way in general and we can benefit from

technology

, but we

also

need to take care of our lives, our societies, our values and people around us. So, My

suggesstion

an idea that is suggested

suggestion

is use

Suggestion

is to use

the

technology

donot

Suggestion

do not

misuse it

Tue Mar 10 2020

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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