Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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Life

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is a gift, we have heard

this

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saying often in our lives, but have we given it little thought what

life

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is all about??

Life

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is a journey that starts when someone is born and end with death,

life

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has too many

colors

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

calories

life

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can be happy, miserable, meaningful, meaningless,

aimbitious

having a strong desire for success or achievement

ambitious

and lost. Since the inception of

human race

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the human race

, we've always endeavoured to make things more convenient for us.

Life

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when spent with luxuries is often considered a good

life

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Technology

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is just an aspect of human development towards the betterment of

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life

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life, however

however

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technology

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has its pros and cons.

Technology

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can benefit us in many ways,

infact our

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in fact, our

in fact our

lives are completely changed with

technology

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. Someone a century ago would not have imagined the kind of

life

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we are living today, the amenities bestowed by

technology

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are

un-countable. We have

means

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the means

to travel, faster than ever. We can communicate miles away without even moving an inch. We can witness the

exhalirating

making lively and cheerful

exhilarating

events happening

aroud

in the area or vicinity

around

the world, without even leaving our room. We can learn, earn, get entertained at our homes. All of

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is the blessing of

technology

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and to be fair

technology

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has made

life

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much better.

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technology

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has

also

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impacted human race in not very positive way.

For example

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: People were healthier

generaly

usually; as a rule

generally

, when they used to play physical sports, but now with the spread of

technology

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people don't often go out to play, they engage in computer games and

that is

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not a very healthy

habbit

an established custom

habit

. Another downside of

technology

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is that, it has limited human interaction to very minimal and only for use. We can see the world, but we are often unaware of our family matters,

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is only because we spent much time on social media and we've lost interest in human

intereaction

a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting

interaction

interactions

, which is causing

disfunction

(medicine) any disturbance in the functioning of an organ or body part or a disturbance in the functioning of a social group

dysfunction

is society as

whole

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a whole

. So I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

technology

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has changed human lives in a positive way in general and we can benefit from

technology

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, but we

also

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need to take care of our lives, our societies, our values and people around us. So, My

suggesstion

an idea that is suggested

suggestion

is use

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is to use

the

technology

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donot

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do not

misuse it

Tue Mar 10 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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357 words

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of children that read for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more? (Write at least 250 words.)

Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of this increased demand, and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?