Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem
Dear Sam,
I am writing to explain my resentment with the car parking
place
at work.
The main concern which we are facing is not having separate parking for the two wheelers
. We have to Add a hyphen
two-wheelers
place
our bicycle or Correct your spelling
motorbike
motor bike
in the same Correct your spelling
motorbike
place
which is provided for the cars. Moreover
, we could see lot
of damages our vehicle because of the four-wheelers hitting our belongings when they take their cars.
Change the article
a lot
This
results in unwanted
Add an article
an unwanted
the unwanted
quarrel
between other employees. Fix the agreement mistake
quarrels
In addition
, it reflects at their work and that reduces the productivity. Also
, the staffs are unhappy because of the spoilage of their vehicles which caused by the car owners.
I would suggest you allot a
separate space for two and Remove the article
apply
four wheelers
to park their Add a hyphen
four-wheelers
auto mobiles
. Correct your spelling
automobiles
Furthermore
, separate entry and exit should be provided to avoid traffic congestion in the parking area. By providing separate pass
will allow them to utilize the Fix the agreement mistake
passes
place
allotted for them. I hope this
will resolve the current issue.
I look forward to receiving a positive response at
Change preposition
on
this
matter.
Yours sincerely,
SarulathaSubmitted by sarulatha1.g on
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