Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem

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Dear Sam, I am writing to explain my resentment with the car parking

place

at work. The main concern which we are facing is not having separate parking for the

two wheelers

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. We have to

place

our bicycle or

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motorbike

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motor bike

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motorbike

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in the same

place

which is provided for the cars.

Moreover

, we could see

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of damages our vehicle because of the four-wheelers hitting our belongings when they take their cars.

This

results in

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an unwanted

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quarrel

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between other employees.

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, it reflects at their work and that reduces the productivity.

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, the staffs are unhappy because of the spoilage of their vehicles which caused by the car owners. I would suggest you allot

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separate space for two and

four wheelers

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four-wheelers

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to park their

auto mobiles

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automobiles

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Furthermore

, separate entry and exit should be provided to avoid traffic congestion in the parking area. By providing separate

pass

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will allow them to utilize the

place

allotted for them. I hope

this

will resolve the current issue. I look forward to receiving a positive response

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this

matter. Yours sincerely, Sarulatha

Submitted by sarulatha1.g on Tue Mar 10 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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