Write a letter to your manager explaining your grievance with the parking situation at work. 1) Explain the problem 2) Explain the results 3) How you plan to solve the problem

Dear Sam, I am writing to explain my resentment with the car parking
place
at work. The main concern which we are facing is not having separate parking for the
two wheelers
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. We have to
place
our bicycle or
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motorbike
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motor bike
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in the same
place
which is provided for the cars.
Moreover
, we could see
lot
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of damages our vehicle because of the four-wheelers hitting our belongings when they take their cars.
This
results in
unwanted
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an unwanted
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quarrel
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between other employees.
In addition
, it reflects at their work and that reduces the productivity.
Also
, the staffs are unhappy because of the spoilage of their vehicles which caused by the car owners. I would suggest you allot
a
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separate space for two and
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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to park their
auto mobiles
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automobiles
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.
Furthermore
, separate entry and exit should be provided to avoid traffic congestion in the parking area. By providing separate
pass
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will allow them to utilize the
place
allotted for them. I hope
this
will resolve the current issue. I look forward to receiving a positive response
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this
matter. Yours sincerely, Sarulatha
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