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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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Over the decades, it is an undeniable fact that the planet earth is experiencing a substantial amount of climate
change
.
This
 essay will explore two of the root causes for global warming and propose some ways to mitigate
this
 burning issue. To commence with the significant factor responsible for
this
change
 in climate
change
 is the emission of carbon dioxide in the environment. Human activities which lead to
this
 phenomenon is burning of fossil fuels in humongous power plants and industries. Another crucial cause is burning of gasoline in vehicles for the transportation purpose, as there is a rapid increase in population which leads to increase in personal vehicles. Due to these practices tons of Co2 is released into our ecosystem.
This
 eventually increases the ratio of carbon dioxide and eventually our ozone layer is getting damaged which will be detrimental for both human beings and flora and fauna.
Nonetheless
, these acute problems can be addressed if authorities as well as citizens come together and join hands for our better future. Government needs to enforce limits on co2 emissions and reduce dependency on fossil fuels.
Instead
 of fossil fuels like coal and oil, industries should invest in alternative methods
such
 as wind power and solar energy. People can contribute by making
change
Suggestion
changes
 in their lifestyle, to illustrate switching to companies which only use renewable energy in production and manufacturing of the goods. Little changes can lead to a brighter future, to emphasize while shopping choosing efficient light bulbs which consume less power and switching off unnecessary lights. In conclusion two of the main reasons for global warming is the use of fossil fuels in industries and in vehicles.
However
, these problems could be tackled by government through the implementation of stringent laws at higher levels and by responsible citizens who can individually make
this
 world a better place for our future generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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