Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

I believe that having to speak a foreign

language

in a country is indeed a serious social problems, as well as practical problems. I'm a primary example of how much problem it caused me socially and practically when I moved into France from India for job reasons. Being born and brought up in India and stayed here whole life for nearly 30 years and

then

one day I was told by my manager that I need to move to France for project work. Honestly, it was super exciting because all my life I had known France through movies or books,

also

of Eiffel Tower especially and thought of getting to see it live only had been excited like a kid, but it wasn'

that thrilling when I moved to France alone. I hardly knew more than 2 words, Bonjour and Merci so in that I just couldn'

deal with not being able to communicate with anyone. I couldn'

do grocery or any other basic necessary shopping

also

and I had to always rely on someone to help it might for buying or anything which was just infuriating after a point and

that is

when I realized how it is necessary to learn a foreign

language

. Later, I joined French classes and the happiness I had in interacting with someone or understanding what they were speaking gave me joy and another advantage I had was it helped me know French culture more clearly and embrace it fondly. So I do agree that it does cause a problem, but I believe sometimes it might cause too much mental pressure on someone who will be not be interested or

also

when they might not able to grasp that foreign

language

quickly during that time it may negative impact on them, which can be avoided if schools start educating their students with one foreign

language

at least because if kids start learning in tender age

then

not only they will be able to grasp things easily and they won'

forget it easily.

Tue Mar 10 2020

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.

Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.