You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, Application for the post of Nanny I recently saw an advertisement in an Australian magazine, Daily times, for a nanny to live with a family for six months. The placement was of interest to me as I will be spending
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length of time in Australia for my vacation and a
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job will make my stay more eventful. Am a Nigerian living in New Zealand and have had the opportunity of taking care of young children for three families who unfortunately for me, relocated at different points to other countries.
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, does not stop my love for being around children because they give me a different sense of satisfaction. Am a fluent English speaker, jovial and
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you will really enjoy having in your home. I intend
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my leisure time to visit interesting places in Australia especially Sydney, having heard so much of how beautiful the city is and cannot wait to explore every part of it. I will be looking forward to a favourable response from you as
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will really make me happy. Attached is my resume with every other personal detail you may require.   Yours Faithfully, Daisy Sea.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • live with
  • look after
  • six-year-old child
  • suitable
  • employ
  • free time
  • Australia
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