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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, a trend is set that University students have been often preferred to study abroad comparatively.
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 studying in abroad exposes yourself to pool of opportunities, but, simultaneously discloses
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 of several challenges
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 as culture and linguistics. Though there are challenges, but those can never outweigh the chances that studying overseas will provide. Most of the institutions in abroad have teachers across the world which will reveal
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 of the various ideas and learning. Renowned universities will possess newly advanced technologies and learning methodologies which help students to accustom with the modern trends. Being an Indian, I have observed many average students performing great and exceptionally well in abroad where the infrastructures and
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 is far better and matured than ours.
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, as per my experience, I believe that
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 from abroad not only enrich
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 self by teachers across the globe, but
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 help to intimate with the advanced trends of
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. The main disadvantage of studying abroad is the linguistic and cultural differences between the two regions. It will always be difficult to adjust and mould
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 self to the languages and their nuances. Forming a social group of friends will be hard as
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 need to learn the common language else resulting in loneliness and boredom.
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, few people get depressed in
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 occasions and decides to return their hometown being unable to cope with
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 hard circumstances. At
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, I want to state that though there are many positive possibilities, but the issues with communication still exist for students studying in abroad. To conclude receiving
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 from abroad universities has shown a sharp rise among students. Studying in abroad puts themselves to enormous amount of technological opportunities which
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 is not aware, but it comes with challenges in terms of communication and adjustment with the culture.
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, the plethora of opportunities and benefits of studying in abroad will never be dominated by the disadvantages which can be managed with time.
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