Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.
That is
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because plants and animals
is
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are
essencial resource
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an essential resource
essential resource
essential resources
the essential resource
of
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on
planet
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the planet
. If we loss those things, people
also
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couldn't get
souce
flavorful relish or dressing or topping served as an accompaniment to food
sauce
those
says
what makes energy for
humans' body
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the human body
human body
human's body
and it will ruin every
system
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.
we
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We
have no longer life
in
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on
Earth. 
Other
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Others
say that there are more important
environment
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environmental
problems,
such
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as air pollution, lack of
water suppliment
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a water supplement system
water supplement system
system
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, disposable plastic. It might cause serious
environment
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environmental
problems.
because
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Because
of
bad air condition
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the bad air condition
nowadays people easily get
respiratory orga proplem
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the respiratory organ problem
respiratory organ proplem
respiratory organ problems
respiratory organ problem
respiratory orga problem
respiratory orga problems
.
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,
bottom line
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the bottom line
is that those problems are
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second matter
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a second matter
of issues. To be specific, the reason why our air
system
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doesn't work is that we discard many trees and forest for creating contemporary buildings. Air
condition
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conditioning
will be better if we have enough plants. For
such
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reason I strongly believe that environmental problem related
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to
plants and animals is
most important issue
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the most important issue
. If we build
solid eco
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a solid Eco system
solid Eco system
solid ecosystem
system
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, other problems doesn't go with bad situations.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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