Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Nowadays, money became a most powerful equipment in communities for day to day lifestyle which makes human happy.
This
easy discuss about how people can make happy with a capital and what are other things can make human happy except handling the funds.
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first
point, lots of families are working hard to earn cash to build their life more comfortable by buying luxury house, car and other materialistic things. Linking Words
Therefore
, they have to find a proper job with excellent wages to cover those belongings because of that they do not have enough time period to having relax and rest Linking Words
as a result
of that they have become unhealthy and having a mental illness. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the cash can purchase only physical thing which can make human eyes satisfaction and it has limited value, but could not borrow love, care, safety and relationship which having from the human heart and it has unlimited value. Linking Words
For instance
, the money can buy friends, but cannot buy good friendship because Linking Words
that is
more expensive than other touchable things. Linking Words
Additionally
, a millionaire can buy a house, but can buy a home which has love, caring and family relationship. Visible things can make only temporary satisfaction rather than having permanent satisfaction from invisible things. Linking Words
In addition
, the pay is just numbers that show up in a paper which can count even so the happiness is uncountable which does not display on numbers.
In conclusion, happiness depends on our mind not with the wealthy, Linking Words
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always change if it has a quantity. By focusing on that happiness brings what we have on our hands and what we can achieve in our life.Accept comma addition
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