There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that student should only

study

their main

subjects

to achieve

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academic success and they do not need to

study

other

subjects

. I think

this

will make

students

be difficult to cope with their daily

life

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and pose a threat to their

health

,

although

they may have more job opportunities. The young will not have

time

to kick back if all the non-academic courses disappear. Nowadays, young

people

are busy with their compulsory classes and they even can not have a rest. So the other courses,

such

as music class or painting class can be a good

time

for them to relax. If these

subjects

are diminished,

students

will be more tired and the lack of rest will present a challenge to their

health

, especially their mental

health

. They may have a depression and the depression will

finally

damage their physical

health

-- they may try to kill themselves!

This

opinion may

also

lead to a lack of

life

experience and

then

students

can not live a good

life

when they are mature and they require to live on their own. Unacademic classes can teach

students

how to solve the problems they may

meet

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in daily

life

. if they have never learnt about

this

knowledge, they can not live a happy

life

alone.

For instance

, if they have never studied cookery, cooking by themselves will be impossible for them.

Then

they may have to eat fast food and live an unhealthy

life

.

However

, that view has its own advantages. Young

people

who only

study

main classes may have more vocational opportunities than others. Most companies only lay emphasis on

students

' specialised skills. And everyone has 24 hours per day, so if young

people

spend all their

time

on compulsory courses, they will

study

their main

subjects

for a longer

time

than those who spend part of their

time

on other

subjects

.

As a result

, it is more probable for them to get higher scores in academic

subjects

, which is considered as the symbol of owning better-specialised abilities.

Then

, companies are willing to give them jobs.

To sum up

, if we remove all the non-academic

subjects

, young

people

may be more likely to find a job.

However

,

this

will cause damage to their mental

health

and it may be difficult for them to live alone.