You are planning for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. 1) Tell him/her why you want to take a vacation 2) Describe your plan 3) Invite him/her to go with you

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Dear Priya, How are you?

Hope

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letter bring you good health. It’s been

long

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time since we met each other. I’m planning for

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time-off from my work and visit some

places

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for which I would insist you to join with me.

I’ve

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I have

I have got

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a long weekend

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March month.

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from 20th March to 24th March and if I take leave on 25th and 26th it will come around 10 days of leave. Because of

hectic

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work

schedule

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I would like to take a break from my work and travel to some new

places

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like Dubai to refresh myself from the routine task. I’ve checked the flight cost for Dubai, it’s around 40,000 for the round trip and we can book the rooms online for accommodation. I’ll be starting from Chennai on

20th

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night and will reach there on

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morning.

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place has more tourist spots

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as shopping

mall

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dessert

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safari and more which will be adventurous to see the

places

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. I

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you will find

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plan exciting because you

also

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wish to see these

places

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and

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you are

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available on these days as your office

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closed on these days.

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, it’ll be a better opportunity for us to unite after a long time.

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plan will

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workout

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for you and look forward to catching you soon. Best wishes Saru

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

229 words

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