Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign a language is in order to travel or to work in foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In todays era of globalisation, many people believe that people learn foreign
language
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as they are working or travelling to these
countries while
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countries, while
, others believe that these are not the only reasons why people learn other languages. I strongly agree that many other factors makes people to learn other languages whilst in
this
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essay I would like to discuss both the sides and support my stand with examples. Many people now a days stay in
ither
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
countries and when you stay in other places it becomes important to learn their
language
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as it ease out the level of understanding and improves comfort level.
For
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instance when
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instance, when
you go to remote location some people might not
understanding
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understand
anyother
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any other
language
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than their counties
language
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,
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,
in that case if you try to buy something it becomes very difficult to
communicate we
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communicate, we
might try to order x goods and end up in buying y or frustrate because that person will not understand. Contrary to
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many people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that higher studies or work is not the only reason why people learn foreign
language
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.
Firstly
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, knowing different languages helps in boosting memory power. A study by the Times showed that learning more that two languages increases
barin
relevant relation or interconnection
bearing
retaining capability which reduces the chances of
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.
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, some people like to know about others culture and to understand it better they learn these languages which bring them close to the locals.
For instance
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, a friend of mine has
intrest
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an interest
interest
interested
interests
in knowing the culture of other countries that he learnt 7
langauages
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
and speak as
fluemtly
in a fluent manner
fluently
as
an
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a
native speaker. To summarize, I strongly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
although
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learning foreign languages helps in higher studies or
work but
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work, but
it is not the only reason why some humans
prefers
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prefer
to learn them,
many
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much
out of
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
or to exercise their
memorry
something that is remembered
memory
memories
holding capacity tends to learn them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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