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many people believe that mobile phone cause more harms than benefits. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Cell phones have been used in many people's lives. Some individuals think that mobile
phone
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 brings more negative elements than merits for humans. I disagree with
this
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 view because
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, it makes people's communication closer and
secondly
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, it makes the way of getting news easier. The mobile
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 makes the communication between individuals becoming more convenient. People have to
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 mails to keep in touch with each other. Even in the era of telephone coming out, residents have to go to public telephone positions or install a
phone
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 at home to give a call to others, which in really
unconvenient
not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs
inconvenient
. Differently, after many people have mobiles, they can communicate with each other in anytime and anywhere, which cannot be imagined in the past.
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, people can
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 their cell phones to call others when they need to inform someone something, particularly they could
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 some applications
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 as WhatsApp, Skype or Zoom to give a video call to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 person or even have a temporary meeting on their phones.
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, it is more convenient to get news when people
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 mobiles. After the combinations between mobile phones and computers, more and more citizens' cell
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 become smarter. They can
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smart
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a smart phone
smart phones
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 to read news and get contemporary information quickly
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 of through newspaper or television only. Some researchers might argue that
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 occasion makes increasingly people
use
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 smart
phone
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 too long
time which
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time, which
 is harmful for their health
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 as eyesight and neck.
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, with the development of technology,
such
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 problem would be tackled.
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, some companies' mobiles have the eyesights' protection mode that could decrease the harms for customers' eyes. These progresses contribute people to read
news
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the news
 more timely and longer. In conclusion, I disagree with the point that the disadvantages of cell
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 overweigh advantages because it makes humans' communication easier and gets news quicker. It
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will be
 interesting to see the influence of it for human beings in the future.
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