Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Throughout their lives people have to manage
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. Some believe that having better finances and less free hours is better than vice versa. Each group has their opinions based on their preferences.
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First
of all, should people have better incomes they would be able to fulfil their needs more easily and they would probably not feel any economic pressure. Linking Words
For instance
, taxes, education, food and many other goods and services require people to spend most of their salary in order to fulfil Linking Words
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Although
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implies a significant lifestyle improvement, it is sure to be followed by stressful schedules and probably lack of sleep due to the limited amount of free Linking Words
time
available. It is scientifically proven that stress and lack of sleep could cause serious health problems.
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On the contrary
, some people argue that it is better to have more free Linking Words
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To begin
with, having extra hours can improve one’s physical and psychological health. In fact, most of Linking Words
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could be invested doing exercise, visiting relatives or relaxing after long and tedious days, which will improve one’s confidence and mood. Use synonyms
Additionally
, people could spend extra hours practising abilities like playing an instrument, writing or learning a new language which is always useful. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, some luxuries might have to be replaced. Linking Words
For example
, people might choose public transport Linking Words
instead
of buying a new car, or cancel online services due to the more pressing needs that must be satisfied.
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are essential for a balanced lifestyle. In my opinion, it is important to manage both in order to fulfil basic needs, but without overlooking social interaction, health and moments to spend doing something one likes.Use synonyms
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