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Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it more important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure survival of local languages and if so, how?

It is certainly true that
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english
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the English language
English language
language
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 has become more popular as
comapred
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
 to the local languages in schools.In my
opinoin
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
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,
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
,
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,
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 plays
a
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an
 imperative role to be a successful and mandatory for everyone to learn it, but not at the cost of local
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
. Many steps can be taken by
indiviual
a human being
individual
 and government to save it. To commence with
,
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,
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 is a norm of the day
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
 it is a global
language
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.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
, a person not only compete with
next
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 door neighbour, other students
,
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,
 other citizens of the same
country but
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country, but
also
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 the people of other nations
,
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,
too.
In addition
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,
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,
to be
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
 in
this
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 cut
thraot
the passage to the stomach and lungs; in the front part of the neck below the chin and above the collarbone
throat
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
 on
world wide level
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a world wide level
,
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,
knowlede
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 of
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english
Suggestion
the English language
English language
language
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 is a must. In others words
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 has become a lingua
franca
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Franca
.
Recent study
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A recent study
 shows that in 86 countries are
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 spoken.To flourish, expand and
deveolp
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
through out
all the way through
throughout
 the world
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 is
nescessary
absolutely essential
necessary
 to learn in school. On the hand,
this
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 type of progress cannot be tolerated at the loss of local languages. Saving local
language
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 is a combined effort of locals and
authorities
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the authorities
.Government should
organised
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organise
 sponsored
wareness
having knowledge of
awareness
 campaign. Since effective awareness about
importance
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the importance
 of native
language
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 can reduce the
meanace
something that is a source of danger
menace
menus
 of its
extinctionupto
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 some extent.With regard to locals, they should understand
culure
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
 and
langauges
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
 are inextricably linked to each others.
Moreover
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,
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 is a medium to understand a culture. It is a well known fact
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 dies,
culture
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the culture
a culture
 dies.
Therfore
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Therefore
, they should try to keep local
lamgauges
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
 alive for the sake of their
culutue
followers of an exclusive system of religious beliefs and practices
cult
. In conclusion
,
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,
there is no
scepticisim
doubt about the truth of something
scepticism
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 has become the
language
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 of the world.I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
, it is the
demad
request urgently and forcefully
demand
dead
 of the
contemprary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
 evolution to learn
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english but
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English, but
English but
 at the same time
,
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,
preservance
keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last
preserving
 local
langauges
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
languages
 is mandatory because it
relaes
make a logical or causal connection
relates
 to our culture and tradition.

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