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Many doctors say that people in today`s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions are there to this problem?

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In these days people are less healthy. A lot of doctors declare that people does not
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 much.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why people do not
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 and provide solutions to
this
 matter. One of the reasons why people do not do enough physical activities, is that they are lazy. Most people nowadays prefer to spend the most of their time on their phone or at home.
For
example
, they playing video games or they sleep the whole day. Other reasons, is that people that work a lot at the end of the day are very tired and they avoid going to the gym.
For
example
, if somebody had a twelve hour shift there is no chance that he will spend another hour running or jumping around. Overall laziness and tiredness are the reasons why I believe that people do not
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 much.
However
, one of the solutions can be making sports more interesting. With the right advertising campaign, we can attract more people.
For
example
, if we want to target those that spend a lot of hours on social media, we should advertise on social platforms in order to get their attention. Other solutions can
also
 be considered in reducing hours of work. If we allow workers to have shorter shifts, they might be more in favour to do some
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
.
For
example in
Accept comma addition
example, in
 Sweden the government reduced the weekly hours from forty to 30 hours per week, in
this
 way people have more time to dedicate to their health. In conclusion, I think that people should dedicate more time for themselves in order to conduct a healthier lifestyle.
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