Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster . Do you agree

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It is said that having individuals from various social life and cultural backdrop living together in one country makes the country
increse
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
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increases
faster.
Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
and more people used to live in the same country which is so peaceful place.There are so many benefits in
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essay. Many people before lived together more rather than today and they tried to contact.They
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helped each other. Today, communities and contacts are decreasing day by day because of inventing up to date technologies.
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Furthermore if
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Furthermore, if
people contact each other less, maybe they don't want to live together.
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