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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster . Do you agree

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It is said that having individuals from various social life and cultural backdrop living together in one country makes the country
increse
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increased
increases
 faster.
Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
 and more people used to live in the same country which is so peaceful place.There are so many benefits in
this
 essay.I a little bit agree
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 essay. I will show some advantages in
this
 essay. Many people before lived together more rather than today and they tried to contact.They
also
 helped each other. Today, communities and contacts are decreasing day by day because of inventing up to date technologies.
First
 of all
,
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more young
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younger
more younger
 generations used to use
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a late time of life
years
 modes of devices
such
 as mobile phones and computers.
Furthermore if
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Furthermore, if
 people contact each other less, maybe they don't want to live together.
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