A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others agree that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons and relevant examples.

The debate over animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans is all over the world.People are divided into two groups, the

first

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party support that animals shouldn't be used to satisfy human needs and

on the other hand

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others believe that animals should

employed

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employ

to achieve their needs.In my opinion, animals are very important

source

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of food and valuable

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for

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systematic investigation to establish facts

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.

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of all, can you believe that people can survive without eating meats?It's impossible for certain populations

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use

plants as the only

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of food.In

lebanon

an Asian republic at east end of Mediterranean

Lebanon

85 percent of the people enjoy eating

animals

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animal

animal's

meat

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and most of their meals will include

meat

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in it. Even though there is 15 percent of the population are

vegieterian but

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vegetarian, but

vegetarian but

we still cannot disregard that fact that there is still 85 percent who have

meat

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as their main

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for making meals.

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,

animal

meat

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is rich in proteins that our bodies rely on.

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Therefore

, meals that

doesn't contain

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don't contain

certain

protiens

any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes

proteins

will cause certain health issues.Based on studies made in

UK

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the UK

in 2002 red

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is very important to strength human's immune system.All in all, humans should include

differnt

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

types of

meat

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in their meals to avoid any health issues.

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, based on what we discussed

earlier we

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earlier, we

can conclude that animals are very important

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for our meals and

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systematic investigation to establish facts

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Despite

all these facts we still see some people still support that animals shouldn't be used by humans and they should have the same rights.In my point of view, I support the parties

that believe using

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believe that using

animals to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their needs and getting

benifts

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of them.