Computer are becoming an essential part of school lesson.Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

Advancements in technology are a boon to everyone, including
school
going kids and teenagers. Needless to say there are few pitfalls too.
This
essay narrates both the aspects of integral part of
school
lesson, the computer On the one hand, there are many advantages of computers, learning it and mastering it to develop softwares and web applications, takes a steep curve. To save,
this
time for swotting, and to be more productive in adulthood, to do a great
job
and business, it is a remarkable idea to learn it in
school
. If skipped in
school
and asked to learn on the
job
,
then
there can be negative effects
such
as delay in deliverables and possible loss of
job
. On
school
days there is less pressure from family and
also
no need to worry about monitory problems, because parent sponsor education, so one can learn with full dedication and master computers in
school
, to better utilise the expertise in
job
and business.
On the other hand
, too much access to the internet using computers will lead to getting attracted at social and hacking websites which will be detrimental to pupils.
Also there
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Also, there
is chance of loosing the idea of remembering the things in the brain, as they will try to store everything in computers. No sooner had they completed the work,
then
they stored on computer and forgot about it.
This
can weaken the memory and thinking ability. If teachers and parents supervise the students and kids,
then
there is less chance of getting lost into the entertainment part of the internet and computers. In conclusion, as discussed both the aspects of computers, careful supervision from adults will help pupils to control on their bad side effects of computers, Of course advantages are more rewarding to the progress of the human being.
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