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Graduating students from one of the UK universities in 2008.

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The bar chart compares the students who graduated excluding full-time job after finishing the college in 2008. Overall, most percentage of United Kingdom
graduate
 and postgraduate students went for
further
 study while less of them went to voluntary work. In both diagrams part-time work and
further
 study was the most changed types, which 17735 of
graduate
 students and over 2500 of postgraduate students while nearly 45% of
graduate
 and almost one
third
 of postgraduate students kept their way to these fields.
Graduate
 students got voluntary work almost 10 times more than postgraduate students
(
Accept space
(
3500 and 345 respectively). There were
also
 ten times more unemployment students after leaving college 16235 of
graduate
 and 1625 postgraduate students.
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