People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays people are doing anything whatever they want.
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,
this
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is possible because of improvement of
transportation
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and
Communication
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Technology
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.
for
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me it is obvious that these are bringing many
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advantages
as well as some of
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the disadvantages
. In
this
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modern era, we cannot do anything without
aid
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the aid
of
development
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the development
of
communication
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technology
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and
transportation
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.A major advantage of
this
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is
development
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the development
a development
of
personal skilled
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skilled personal
. To be more precise, There are
lot
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lots
a lot
of
way
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ways
to improve skilled
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with
the help of
technology
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such
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as
communication
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skilled
that is
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most important in one person's life.
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for
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example,
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a few decades
ago, We had to
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communication
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communicate
via written
letter whereas
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letter, whereas
now we can send any message to anywhere in
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modern Earth.In the same vein, the value of time is
most significant thing
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the most significant thing
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
while it is playing the vital role of our life.
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The
aids of
communication
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technology
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and
transportation
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can save our time and waste of money as well.
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, many Businessman who
are
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is
always busy with their dealing of business do not have sufficient
time meet with their
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time to meet with their
partners.
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is
most effective way
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the most effective way
a most effective way
to take
help
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the help
of
technology
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and
transportation
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.
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, they are able to contact with their client by the means of electronic devices
such
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as mobile-phone computer and many other gadgets.
On the other hand
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, Sometimes
this
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is bringing some drawback as well. One major drawback is unemployment where nowadays most of the multinational companies are taking many benefits of
Technology
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and
transportation
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that is
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reducing many jobs.A clear example of
this
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is many electronic devices
such
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as robots, computer and so on.To be more precise, Bujonbari, the most popular restaurant in Bangladesh, has many
robots
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robot
workers which
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workers, which
is continue
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continue
are continuing
working day to night
instead
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of
human being
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a human being
human beings
. To sum up
,
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,
the aids of
communication
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technology
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and
transportation
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contribute in
this
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modern age.It has long been my belief that these have many advantages and a little bit of drawbacks as well. If the government
have taken
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had taken
has taken
takes
appropriate step
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appropriate steps
the appropriate step
against these, the situation of the drawback would be reduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication technology
  • transportation
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • freedom
  • work and live
  • development
  • increased job opportunities
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • cultural exposure
  • diversity
  • economic growth
  • globalization
  • social isolation
  • loneliness
  • loss of community
  • sense of belonging
  • expensive cost of living
  • housing
  • strain on infrastructure
  • resources
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