Write a letter to a bus company about things you lost in a bus

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have lost my crucial belongings when I travelled via

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a bus

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of your company

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days ago. Let me explain in detail.Actually, I made my journey from Chandigarh to Delhi with your company 'Akash Travels' on 3/3/2020.I was going to a business meeting

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Delhi, and

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moreover

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I was having my laptop with me. Since I was going for an official meeting with the delegates of my company, so I was working on my presentation, which I need to present there.But, unfortunately, when I reached my destination, in my hurry, I forgot the laptop carry bag

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the bus. Though it is not so much costly, it contains some essential visiting cards and my documents as well. I would like you to post those essential things at my home address, which I am enclosing with

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letter.Please let me know the charges involved.I would pay the expenses either by money order or by online banking as per your convenience. Hoping for

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favourable action from you in

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regard. Yours' faithfully Kajal Maan

kajalmaan.16

Mar 12, 2020

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Write a letter to a bus company about things you lost in a bus

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are a student at a university in the UK. You have recently lost your university ID card. Write to the local police station, giving details of who you are, what happened and ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relation people make? Has that become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?