Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear sir, I am inscribing

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missive to inquire about the details of

you

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your

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premises subscription charges. I am looking forward to using all the facilities and there is no requirement for personal training for me. It would be great if you could give information relating to

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the different

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types of subscriptions available at your gym and what facilities are included in them

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the chargers for each one of them. If there are any events and classes which are organized during the week,

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give details of them as well. Tell me about opening hours, especially during national holidays. Are there any swimming and Zumba classes available during the evenings? I want to join as soon as possible can you inform me about the procedure for joining and what documentation is required from my side? I am waiting for your response and looking forward to joining you. Yours faithfully, Simranjot Kaur

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single idea per paragraph

Try to separate different queries into their own paragraphs for enhanced clarity.

suitable writing tone

Consider using slightly less formal vocabulary such as "letter" instead of "missive".

complete response

The letter provides a clear list of inquiries, which enhances task achievement by covering all necessary points.

suitable writing tone

The closing line expresses eagerness in a polite manner, embodying a suitable writing tone for the context.

logical structure

The letter uses cohesive devices effectively to link questions regarding facilities and membership.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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