Some high school required all student to wear school uniform, other high school permit student to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies you think is better?

Nowadays every single
school
or even company has their own regulations.
Moreover
, some high
school
has a compulsory rule that state all students must wear
school
uniform
.
In contrast
, other
school
gives a permission to their students to choose their own outfit that they want to wear at
school
. I personally believe that high
school
must make students to wear
school
uniform
.
First
off,
uniform
is a symbol of your academy or
school
, if you wear your
uniform it
Accept comma addition
uniform, it
means that your integrity as a student is still
keep
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kept
intact.
Moreover
, if you wear your
school
uniform
to other places
such
as; mall, restaurant, or even a supermarket, it means you bring your
school
pride with you.
Therefore
, you must behave as good as possible to make your
school
reputation pure. It seems to me that not every high
school
uniform
is lame. In fact, some of them are very aesthetic,
for example
; St. Louis high
school
in America has a
uniform
that looks like from the ancient Europe, which makes their students more confident to go to
school
.
Furthermore
, wearing
school
uniform
automatically make us must obey the
school
regulations itself.
In addition
, by strictly make rules that contain about
school
uniform
, and
also
by making punishment if someone disobey the rules, it can increase the obedience to the rules. There was a research in 2014 conducted by Professor John Hopkins from Stanford University, he said that if we can make children obey the rules
since
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for
now, he believes that it can bring myriad beneficial things
to
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into
their life. To conclude, the best
school
policy is to wear
school
uniform
.
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