It’s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.

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One of the highly controversial issues today relates to whether artists and

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can only be successful if they are born with natural

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or whether

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can be nurtured.

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question from

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points of view and

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states my perspective, being that a combination of

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is the key to

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. There are people who argue that

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can only be achieved by people with natural

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. The main reason for believing

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is that

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requires having better genes than others. One good illustration of

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is Michael

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won Olympic medals in swimming due to having a wider arm span than the average person. We can

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see evidence of natural

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in child prodigies who are geniuses whose natural

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shows at a young age.

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, Mozart was already a gifted pianist giving public performances when he was just five years old.

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, it can

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be argued that anyone can achieve

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with the right coaching. A good example of

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due to long hours of coaching is Tiger Woods. He claims that he only become the number one golfer in the world due to his exhausting training schedule.

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, there are those who opine that repetitive training can make it seem like a person was born with innate

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. Take leading martial artists, they spend endless hours undertaking guided training which conditions their reflexes through a process called conditioned learning.

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it seem that the person is gifted yet underpinning their performance is hours of instruction. In conclusion, I believe that

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arguments have their merits. On balance,

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, I tend to believe that true

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only occurs when

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conditions are present.

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, true brilliance requires a good set of genes as well as the right nurturing of that natural

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and hard work and dedication to one’s field.

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It’s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it’s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.

Your opinion

In some countries, the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home or traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Most countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. What problems are caused by international tourism? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

The rise of socila media has affected personal, relationships and society as a whole. Do the advatages of using social media for communication outweight the disadvantages.