In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that a proper

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is still out of reach for the children born in rural parts of developing countries.

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some people suggest building more

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and sending more

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to these areas, others would propose the provision of computers and Internet access. In my personal view, the latter seems more feasible. On the one hand,

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and

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are still fundamental to the objective of making

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accessible to countryside

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.

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,

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serve a number of purposes other than providing places for classes. More importantly,

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function as meeting places for

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to learn the importance of collaborating and socialising with other people, provide an ideal learning environment for

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study and maintain the discipline of

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through regular attendance.

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, owing to poor access to

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systematic and constant

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in the first place,

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in remote areas are unlikely to study by themselves effectively.

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,

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are required in the learning process because they can acknowledge these

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’ deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation, giving suitable exercises or even tutoring them privately.

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, I believe there are good reasons to supply these rural

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with computers and Internet connection. The first reason is that these devices enable the

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to pursue study programmes despite the fact that these

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live in distant areas.

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,

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can use the computer and the Internet to participate in webinars from universities or work with

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teachers

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through emails.

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idea would seem more feasible than sending

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to remote regions to teach. Another reason is that the computer can be a useful learning tool with educational

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software

. There are many computer

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which contain a comprehensive course of self-study these days

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so that

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students

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can use these software applications without travelling out of their hometowns. In conclusion, as people have their own views

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how to provide

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for rural

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, I think that technology would offer a more plausible solution for the reasons mentioned.