Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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In
this
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network decade (internet era), social networking sites have no doubts that bring a lot of convenience into our lives.
However
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, I believe that it somehow delivered some undesirable impacts to both human beings and society. As the usage of social networking sites has become more generally for people nowadays, they would rather stay online than making things happen in real. Making friends is one of the evidence for the network population today. They can easily make friends with a stranger online,
chit-chatting
light informal conversation for social occasions
chitchatting
, playing games like they know each other for a long time.
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, when it comes to real life, they feel shy and awkward which contrasts with how they were online. The efficient of social networking sites allow consumers to receive numerous news and advertisement every day. These news might come from unknown sources that are unfiltered and might be exaggerated and easily get viral until mislead public.
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, a teenage girl being insulted for vandalism in her
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
online, and the message gone viral until the police get into the investigation. But it ended up revealing it is a fake accuse that aims to damage the girl’s reputation.
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, children today have more skills comparing adults in using social networking sites, and they have a vast curiosity for the unknown. They might access some unhealthy channels which they found interested in.
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, they would be easily affected if parents are not aware of it.
Clearly to show
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Clearly show
that social networking sites carry
much more unpredicted impacts
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a much more unpredicted impact
much more unpredicted impact
on inhabitants and society. It leads to people having fewer connections in real life, misleading people when news
get
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gets
viral online and would affect
children’s mind
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a child’s mind
child’s mind
if they are lost control by parents.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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