Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family.
Professional working people always undergo
business
trip
more oftenly
and they tend to take their family along with them. However these
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However, these
trip
help them to spend more Suggestion
trips
time
with their closed one
's and also
helps them to visit places when they aren't
working. However these
trips can sometimes be disadvantaged as their presence can distract their Accept comma addition
However, these
work
and in addition
it can also
lead to feeling sick due to new weather conditions.
On one
hand, people try to involve their family members in their business
trip
in order to spend more time
with them. Taking them along, will help them to not to miss them and also
create's a self of belongingness
among them. For instance
, my friend's dad earlier used to be out for business
meetings for long period's and couldn't
spend much time
with his family. Since he started taking them along with him, it helped him to balance his work
and family time
. In addition
to it, during business
outings they can also
enable their loved ones to explore places and create memories. For example
, my dad one
's took us to the USA with him for his business
trip
and we all visited a lot of historical places which still are the best memories that i
had with my family. Able to be with family for a long refers to the speaker or writer
I
time
and creating memories are the best advantages of taking family along with them.
On the other hand
, Few employees feel that they can't
concentrate on their work
while in family presence and wouldn't
help them in their professional career. Having family with them will make them to worry about families well being and will shift their main focus from work
to family. To illustrate it, one
of my uncle who took his family couldn't
sleep because his son was crying whole night and ultimately he flopped his presentation. Sometime it can also
affect families' health as they aren't
adapted to the new weather conditions. For example
, when I went to Canada with my dad, I couldn't
tolerate the cold and suffered from flue which affected my academics lately. Being distracted and change in weather conditions can lead to a bad trip
with the family.
To conclude, accompanying family in business
trips has advantages likeable to spend more time
and exploring places which can further
lead to strong family bonding. While it also
has few backdrops like being distracted and potential to get sick can make the trip
worse than expected.Submitted by manikanthreddy81 on
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