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There are many different types of music in the world. Why do we need music?is traditional music of a country is more important than the international that is heard everywhere in the world

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Music
 has always been used by humanity since ancient times. It was used not only as a form of relaxation, but
also
 as an expression of culture.
However
, from the perspective of some individuals, humanity should forget traditional
music
 and listen to only modern
one
.
Music
 plays a key role in everyone's life.
First
 of all, it is used to boost up
one
's mood, when
one
 feels downcast.
Secondly
, a person may use
music
 to relieve his or her boredom. What I mean by
this
 is that, when a person is in a long term journey or a flight,
music
 could be the way to chill out.
In addition
,
music
 could be the way of income. Singers gather a huge stadium of audience and give them concerts Traditional
music
 has been developed for decades, it went from
one
 generation to another. It helps societies to remember and retain their cultural and national identity.
Moreover
, every culture has its own traditional
music
, which is unique and we should keep it and pass it to our
next
 generation
On the other hand
, the infers prefer listening to contemporary
music
 to traditional
music
, which usually comes to our societies from the Western societies that are unusual in our Uzbek culture as well as
music
.Owning to the fact that modern
music
 is more familiar to the younger generation and their lifestyle, they are prone to listen to it.That kind of
music
, provides enjoyment and pleasure as well to them All in all, in my point of view, both: traditional and modern
music
 should be in our society. And we should never forget our traditional
music
 which comes to our modern world from past and history.And I truly believe that traditional
music
 and international have the same value for countries
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