some people say that teachers should be paid according to how their students learn. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals hold the opinion that the teachers' income should be linked with their students learning attainment.

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essay disagrees with

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view because

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, it will bring the huge stress on students and does harm to them and

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, it could stop cooperation environment between educators in schools.

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system would impose too much

presure

the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)

pressure

on children's and teenagers' lives. In

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atmosphere, every teacher will apply any strategy to raise learners' grades, including a lot of homework, occupying break time or PE class to tutor students, and even using physical punishment in sometimes. These methods will make all pupils suffering the huge stress throughout the

school

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age.

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, in Korea, many schools link the teacher's salary with their students' learning achievement, which causes teachers using different ways to force pupils to study. Many teenagers have mental problems and even

suisides

the act of killing yourself

suicides

suicide

subsidies

because of the learning

presures

a particular course of action intended to achieve a result

procedures

.

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, the system could prohibit development of cooperation atmosphere at

school

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. Some

school

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managers might argue that

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policy can stimulate instructors' awareness of

competation

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

.

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, from a macro-view, in

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case, each tutor just would like to guide and help their own students, but who is unwilling to assist any other learner.

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, in China, some teachers only would like to answer the questions from their own classes' students, while for the other students who want to ask a question, those teachers normally reject to answer. In fact,

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is disadvantageous to the all learners' improvement

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. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the view of paying teachers according to their students' learn, because it will bring too much stress on students and it is harmful to

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school's cooperation atmosphere

Suggestion

the school's cooperation atmosphere

and

inhibite

to put down by force or authority

inhibit

inhibited

inhibits

all students' common improvement. It will be interesting to see the consequences of

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system applied of some countries in the future.