It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

We have so many countries and having various people from different cultures. There are so many believe that people should be
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motivated
to get married at their early
age
,
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,
this
is
the good
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the best
decision for
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particular person people
particular person person
the particular person person
a particular person person
and for their respective society. Regarding
this
topic we have fooled
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a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
.But I
beilive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
there should not be
age limit
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an age limit
for
marriage
. Many years back people feel that cause finding good
soulmate
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soul mate
for another
person
is very difficult after some
age
.
before
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Before
,
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,
1947 there so many people follow some rituals that when baby girl born
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at
in
to
that time they decide her
marriage
before asking anything. They did
such
things for providing her good wealth and safety.But as day
passed they
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passed, they
realized that people should ask girl too. Girls
also
have their own choices. And that ritual was disappeared in nearly 2000. Before marrying 30 gives lots of
advantages like
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advantages, like
one
person
can afford his/her
child
education before his/her retirement. They can give their 100% to
child
. Afford all the basic needs.They can focus more on their own
child
.Even though sometimes early marriages become the cause of divorce.
However
,
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,
There should be no
age
limit.
some
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Some
people ready at certain
age
and some people ready at different
age
.
forcing
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Forcing
them make
relation
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the relation
more worst. Having a
child
in that atmosphere affect his/her mind and not able to get the love from both parents. Early
marriage
increase
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increases
more stress and
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
threat
depression for one
person
. Sometimes it
affact
have an effect upon
affects
the responsibility level.
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Having
lots of problems crates unhealthy relation between husband and wife. If drastically changed the life of them and leads them to suicide and depression. So
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,
I personally
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accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
there should not be
a
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an
age
limit. If
person
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a person
want
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wants
to be a part of
marriage
then
and
then
only they should.
otherwise
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Otherwise
,
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,
it will ruin their own life
,
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wealth
,
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health and disturb and made unhappy
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their closed ones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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