Some believe that technology, such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

As the cell phone has enriched in our every corner of life, people hold the view that interpersonal communication is interrupted by is. From my perspective, I agree with
argument
Suggestion
the argument
. On one hand, it cannot be denied that technologies
such
as mobile phones
cut-off
a designated limit beyond which something cannot function or must be terminated
cutoff
a person from the real environment who is constantly on his/her phone.
This
interrupts him/her to have a face to face conversation with the people surrounding us which gradually decreases his/her importance in its vicinity. It is seen that, to exemplify, people like to maintain distance with a person who prefers to call them rather meeting them personally.
On the other hand
, technologies like cell phones allows us to make contact with our far away family members or friends.
This
to say that, if any of our family
member
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members
or our close friend has to go far away from us because of some personal reasons, the best possible way to contact them is through mobiles only as
face-to-face conversation
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a face-to-face conversation
is not possible.
This
is best illustrated by imagining a mother whose only son has to go abroad for studies, she will be relaxed only when she can have a talk with her son which is possible only through these technologies. In conclusion, I believe that there are both positive and negative aspects of mobile phones on social interaction.
Although
, it affects our face-to-face contacts, yet its importance in maintaining relationships with family and friends is undeniable. People should use these technologies sensibly as these were invented to make our lives comfortable.
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