In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

#countries #weight #people #levels #health #fitness #measures

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

NOWADAYS, HEALTH ISSUES HAVE BEEN ENORMOUSLY INCREASING AS THE WORLD IS NOT SHOWING THAT CONCER WHICH IS NECESSARY TO TAKE. MANY NATIONS HAVE THE INCREASED NUMBER OF BALANCES WEIGHTED FOLKS

HOWEVER

Linking Words

, THEIR THEY ARE NOT FIT AS THEY SHOULD BE. THERE ARE SEVERAL CAUSE AND SOLUTION TO

THIS

Linking Words

MENACE.

FIRSTLY

Linking Words

THIS

Linking Words

ESSAY WILL DISUCSS THE MAJOR REASON BEHING FORMING

THIS

Linking Words

ISSUE AND

SECONDLY

Linking Words

, THE MEASURE STEP TO TACKLE

THIS

Linking Words

. ON THE ONE HAND, PRIMARILY, AWARAGE

WEIGHT

Use synonyms

PEOPLE DO NOT HAVE SUFFICIENT AMOUNT OF NUTRION IN THEIR BODY

THAT IS

Linking Words

FINDAMENTAL TO HAVE.

THIS

Linking Words

RESULTS IN THE FORMATION OF MUSCLE TISSUES AND HEALING POWER WHICH DIMINISHES THE IMMUNITY POWER IN THE PERSON'S BODY.

HENCE

Linking Words

, THEY ARE BECOME MORE PRONE TO DEVELOP A VARIOUS HEALTH PROBLEMS.

FOR EXAMPLE

Linking Words

, AS PER THE HEALTH, DEPARTMENT OF THE UK STUDIES, 80% OF THE MEDIUM WEIGHTED INDIVIDUALS CATCHE THE INFECTION INSTANTLY IN COMPARED TO PROPER WEIGHTED FOLKS.

THIS

Linking Words

MAJOR PROBLOEM HAS A SIMPLE SOLUTION BY INFORMING THE GENERAL PUBLIC ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF HAVING

SUCH

Linking Words

IMPROPER

WEIGHT

Use synonyms

PATERN IN LIFE.

THIS

Linking Words

AWARENESS MAKE THEM AFRAI OF LOOSING OR GAINING MORE WEIGHTB AND

AS A RESULT

Linking Words

, THE NIUMBER OF AVARAGE WEIGH INDIVIDUALS WILL BE DECLINE.

FOR INSTANCE

Linking Words

, THE USA GOVERNEMENT IMPLIMENTED A NEW LAW THAT MENTION THE PROPER

WEIGHT

Use synonyms

FOR EACH INDIVIDUAL TO GAIN AND WHO DO NOT HAVE, THEY ARE PENALIZESD. IN CONCLUSION,

WEIGHT

Use synonyms

INDEED PLAYS A VITAL ROLE IN PERSON'S LIFE TO OBTAIN 1005 WELLNESS. PERHAPS,

THIS

Linking Words

COULD BE BOOST BY HAVING GOVERNMENT SUPPORT BY ARRANGING AN AWARENESS PROGRAM.

THIS

Linking Words

WOULD RESULT IN HE DECLNING NUMBER OF PEOPLE WITH

WEIGHT

Use synonyms

well-being ISSUES.

Submitted by drsefalipatel on Fri Mar 13 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

267 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary
obesity
overweight
physical activity
sedentary lifestyle
exercise
unhealthy diet
fast food
urbanization
modernization
stress
awareness
education
government intervention
policies
promotion
sports
fitness programs
health education
taxation
public transportation
infrastructure
parks
recreational spaces

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Some people believe that women should be allowed to play an equal role to men in police and military forces. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
There are different opinions regarding women’s role in police and military forces. Some argue that women should be given equal opportunities in these professions, while others argue that they are not suitable for these demanding jobs.
7
band
It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
There is no denying the fact that the majority of students do not prefer to study science as a subject in many world regions. This essay will discuss the causes the result in this issue and explain its effects on society.
5.5
band
In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?
Currently, this main issue has been mostly debatable about the growing economic countries that have many rich people in developed and developing countries. I am confident that those people are not enjoyable or cheerful when compared with the past, and I will describe why this is, in the next paragraph.
7
band
Some believe that violent computer games are just a form of entertainment, while others think they lead directly to violent behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (279)
Some people think that violent computer games are simply a kind of entertainment, whereas others believe that such kinds of games lead to harsh practices. Although it is fun to play violent video games due to their exciting challenges at each level, I believe that people tend to adopt what they practice in real life, which fosters rough behaviour.
7
band
In a number of countries around the world, income inequality is a growing issue. What are the causes of income inequality and how it can be dealt with?
It is a fact that people are having income inequality in a lot of countries around the world. There are several reasons for such a situation and a few visible influences as well. Both aspects are explained in the following paragraphs.

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Your opinion

Some people believe that women should be allowed to play an equal role to men in police and military forces. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

Some believe that violent computer games are just a form of entertainment, while others think they lead directly to violent behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (279)

In a number of countries around the world, income inequality is a growing issue. What are the causes of income inequality and how it can be dealt with?