In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

NOWADAYS, HEALTH ISSUES HAVE BEEN ENORMOUSLY INCREASING AS THE WORLD IS NOT SHOWING THAT CONCER WHICH IS NECESSARY TO TAKE. MANY NATIONS HAVE THE INCREASED NUMBER OF BALANCES WEIGHTED FOLKS

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, THEIR THEY ARE NOT FIT AS THEY SHOULD BE. THERE ARE SEVERAL CAUSE AND SOLUTION TO

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MENACE.

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ESSAY WILL DISUCSS THE MAJOR REASON BEHING FORMING

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ISSUE AND

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, THE MEASURE STEP TO TACKLE

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. ON THE ONE HAND, PRIMARILY, AWARAGE

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PEOPLE DO NOT HAVE SUFFICIENT AMOUNT OF NUTRION IN THEIR BODY

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FINDAMENTAL TO HAVE.

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RESULTS IN THE FORMATION OF MUSCLE TISSUES AND HEALING POWER WHICH DIMINISHES THE IMMUNITY POWER IN THE PERSON'S BODY.

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, THEY ARE BECOME MORE PRONE TO DEVELOP A VARIOUS HEALTH PROBLEMS.

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, AS PER THE HEALTH, DEPARTMENT OF THE UK STUDIES, 80% OF THE MEDIUM WEIGHTED INDIVIDUALS CATCHE THE INFECTION INSTANTLY IN COMPARED TO PROPER WEIGHTED FOLKS.

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MAJOR PROBLOEM HAS A SIMPLE SOLUTION BY INFORMING THE GENERAL PUBLIC ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF HAVING

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IMPROPER

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PATERN IN LIFE.

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AWARENESS MAKE THEM AFRAI OF LOOSING OR GAINING MORE WEIGHTB AND

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, THE NIUMBER OF AVARAGE WEIGH INDIVIDUALS WILL BE DECLINE.

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, THE USA GOVERNEMENT IMPLIMENTED A NEW LAW THAT MENTION THE PROPER

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FOR EACH INDIVIDUAL TO GAIN AND WHO DO NOT HAVE, THEY ARE PENALIZESD. IN CONCLUSION,

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INDEED PLAYS A VITAL ROLE IN PERSON'S LIFE TO OBTAIN 1005 WELLNESS. PERHAPS,

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COULD BE BOOST BY HAVING GOVERNMENT SUPPORT BY ARRANGING AN AWARENESS PROGRAM.

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WOULD RESULT IN HE DECLNING NUMBER OF PEOPLE WITH

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well-being ISSUES.

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Mar 13, 2020

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sedentary
obesity
overweight
physical activity
sedentary lifestyle
exercise
unhealthy diet
fast food
urbanization
modernization
stress
awareness
education
government intervention
policies
promotion
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fitness programs
health education
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Becoming a well-known person, like a popular movie icon or a sports personnel has benefits and drawbacks. Fame can bring enormous success to a person and can change one’s life

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that hard work will always bring financial sucess. Others say that hard word work is nt enough and that other things are also needed for financial success. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.