Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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About scientific experiments on animals, two opposing views have been suggested, one of which is related to using animals for medical purposes, while the other one is about animals should not be a part of experiments for any reason. In my opinion, animals should be a part of the scientific development for the sake of humanity.

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of all, according to the perspective of some, the results of medical researches need to verify on animals. The rationale behind these ideas might be, they accept human life more important than other creatures. I

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point of view and believe that any kind of scientific theory has to be valid and reliable before using on humans.

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, animals which have similar DNA with the humankind can be a tester to be sure about the effects of a new drug or operation.

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, some other people,

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, testing animals in medical researches is wrong, since they might believe that the experiments on animals are brutal, and unacceptable. Yet, I am not on the same page as these people. To my way of thinking, scientific development is an ongoing process and needs to be tested before use by people.

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, consuming meat might be bad, and can be abandoned by people, but animals that have been used for academic purposes create significant benefits for the human being, and it is necessary. In conclusion, what can be concluded from the aforementioned remarks is that

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some individuals advocate using animals in medical tests is cruel, I firmly believe that these tests have to be done for the sake of people.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ethical considerations
moral dilemma
animal rights
alternative methods
computer modeling
in-vitro testing
medical breakthroughs
vaccines
treatments
stringent regulations
minimization of suffering
humane treatment
scientific validity
biological similarity
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