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more people decided to have childreb in their later age than in the past, why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages ?

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Children are an integral part of our life, not only the present generations but
also
 many previous.
However
, over the past years an increasingly popular trend among millennial's is to become parents at a later age than their parents were. There are some advantages and disadvantages ad
this
 following essay is going to take a look at both sides.In
this
 day and age a
lot
 of young people tend to focus in their jobs and their prospects career than build their own family
,
Accept space
,
 many of them are undecided whether to marry or not.
This
 person is more concerned that children require a
lot
 of material cost, so many parents prefer to earn money
,
Accept space
,
which sometimes takes a dozen years, all these factors benefits.With other hand a mid-thirties woman is harder to sustain the process of pregnancy and childbirth.
Furthermore
, it can lead to the exacerbation of chronic diseases and even disability. Another issue is that the age gap between parents and children increases, which can lead to a misunderstanding of each other due to different life values.
Also
, elderly parents are not as active as younger ones and cannot spend a
lot
 of time with children playing outdoor games or sports. These parents tend to work a
lot
 a don´t have time to spend with their children so to rebate that they spoil these children giving them everything they need or don´t need,
this
 child tend to be very snobby
,
Accept space
,
 they think they are entitled they heaven know what hard work means
.
Accept space
.
From my point of view to sum up all
this
plural of "this"
these
 children need is the love of their family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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