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having a year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common. do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

#year #universities #trend
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Before getting into universities taking a
year
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 break has become increasingly popular among students. I feel it has a positive impact on the teenagers. A term break before the start of the university means having an
experience
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 and supporting themselves financially.
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, I would like to put down the advantages in order to prove that
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 trend is not negative. Some students, who are fresh pass out from schools like to take a
year
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 off because they feel it is important to have some
experience
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 and to actually feel what they would be dealing with while they will be studying. It does not matter if it is a paid or unpaid job, here what matters is the knowledge of the field. It would
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 help the students to use their
experience
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 throughout the course and having an in depth understanding of the subject.
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, someone who would like to study social work, it is profitable if that student has some
experience
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 in the field so that they would be able to mentally prepare themselves regarding their subject ad their future profession. For some students a
year
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 gap allows them to raise their tuition fees. There can be several circumstances where a student cannot join university immediately passing out of school. The reason being either the family cannot support their child financially or the student wants to support oneself. So, a
year
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 gap allows them to save for the tuition fees. There can be several other reasons
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 as deciding which stream he or she would like to opt as a profession. As university admission is the deciding factor of their future. In conclusion, I would like to agree that advantages of taking a
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 off outweighs the disadvantages.

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