You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inquire about a reservation at your seaside hotel. We are a nuclear family of four. We will reach your hotel on Friday at 8 AM as we are going to land at 6:30 AM. After spending three nights we will check out on Monday at 8 AM.
As I mentioned before we are four adults, that's why we were planning to book two Seaview bedrooms with separate washrooms. I would also
like to request if you can arrange a spa day on Sunday for all of us. Furthermore
, It would be helpful for us to plan our trip if you could provide your lowest cost
plan for a three-night stay.
Add a hyphen
lowest-cost
Also
, we are travelling to your place for the first time, I would be grateful if you could suggest some nearby attractions or services that we all can enjoy. We all love to do
hiking and underwater diving.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
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Task Achievement
To further enhance your score, consider expanding on each point with more detail. For example, specify the type of rooms you are interested in more clearly (e.g., twin rooms, double rooms) and why they would be suitable for your family.
Coherence and Cohesion
Include transitional phrases between paragraphs to improve flow and readability. This creates a more cohesive text and guides the reader through your letter more smoothly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider concluding your letter with a summary or a restatement of your main request, which can add to the cohesiveness and close your letter more definitively.
Task Achievement
You have clearly addressed all parts of the task, making specific requests and asking relevant questions.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your paragraphing shows a logical structure, with each paragraph dedicated to a different aspect of your inquiry.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite